Another excellent chapter, I have not read a story like this one, it is very interesting.
| Title: Becoming mad
| 24 May 2013 4:03 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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The commas at the beginning of sentences are very annoying when reading. Otherwise, a good plot.
| Title: Becoming mad
| 10 May 2013 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love Harry's perception of the events thank you
Very good progression, minor characters feel rounded and the thought processes of the major characters and their reactions are consistant and realistic (given who they are) Good chapter
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