Continues to be very good and very interesting.
I just started reading this last night and haven't finished yet but wanted to leave a review now after reading your authors note in the beginning. I just wanted to let you know that I had absolutely no clue that English was not your first language until you said so. Honestly, I only saw a handful of mistakes and I just assumed they were typos they were so small. So, I just wanted to add a little review here to let you know that I think you're doing a great with your English and with your story (and can even write better English than some people whose native language is English!).
| Title: Wands and pills
| 15 May 2013 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry please update. Soon if you can this is so Goodall,
Can't wait for more, update soon!
| Title: Wands and pills
| 11 May 2013 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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If I were them, I would immediately talk with Dursleys. Now I'm curious when Snape will have firsthand experience with Demons attack... And also how will Snape react to Harry's diagnose when he found out what the words mean...
On the other hand... I like that you write about the negative effect from Harry's "treatment" and that you not sugarcoat this. Not only the stiff walk and rolling eyes, but also the fear from havering people, from beds... It tears my heart how Harry fears the demon and he is capable to take the pills even if he fells sick afterwards, and how the Hogwarts professors don't wont to give him his medicine even if they don't know if its really necessary or not.
This is the unique story and I'm looking forward the next chapters! I hope you will never abandon it!
P.S.: Sorry for my mistakes. I'm not English is not my native language. =o)
| Title: Wands and pills
| 11 May 2013 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: cassandra (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is delightful! I can hardly wait to see your next chapter, to find out what happens when Harry's off his meds!
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