I am very intrigued by your story, though I highly suggest finding a beta to edit for you. I was wondering if you are familiar with the story of January (Jani) Schofield, a little girl who was basically born with schizophrenia.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing my story!
English isn't my language by birth, so there might be more mistakes than in stories wirtten by native speakers, butI promise, I try my best! I'm a bit unsure about letting someone beta'ing my story, though I will considere it. Thanks for your advice!