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Reviews For Psychosis
Title: The in-between 05 May 2013 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. I like the way you have portrayed Harry's thoughts and the detail in the medical world
Title: Becoming mad 05 May 2013 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good progression, minor characters feel rounded and the thought processes of the major characters and their reactions are consistant and realistic (given who they are) Good chapter
Title: Lily's child 05 May 2013 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting premise, I like your portrayal of the characters though you might want to try reading dialogue aloud- mostly it flows and sounds realistic but some parts sound a little stilted.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!

    When I wrote the first chapter, I had just started writing in English (I'm not a native speaker) so I hope my skills will have improved by now! (Though I must admit, I thought it rather difficult to write Vernon and Petunia in a halfway credible way)


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