| Title: Quirrell and Loony
| 20 Jun 2013 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great tension and good dialogue thank you
| Title: Quirrell and Loony
| 20 Jun 2013 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous)
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Has anyone tried to get Harry to cast 'lumos' (the light spell)?
It's the simplest of all spells
| Title: The demon is real. And powerful
| 16 Jun 2013 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: EG2 (Anonymous)
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Ah, glad that Harry will finally get some real help!
I like your story a lot - it's an original concept that doesn't overuse the common tropes. And your English, while it has some mistakes, is much better than that of some other authors.
Waiting for the next chapter!
is severus going to visit doctor green?
| Title: The demon is real. And powerful
| 13 Jun 2013 11:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic! Loved Minerva finding them on the floor!
i love it cant wait for the next chapter
| Title: The Talk
| 10 Jun 2013 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful chapter in content and writing thank you so much!
I just started reading this last night and haven't finished yet but wanted to leave a review now after reading your authors note in the beginning. I just wanted to let you know that I had absolutely no clue that English was not your first language until you said so. Honestly, I only saw a handful of mistakes and I just assumed they were typos they were so small. So, I just wanted to add a little review here to let you know that I think you're doing a great with your English and with your story (and can even write better English than some people whose native language is English!).
Another intriguing chapter! Great job, and please update soon! :)
| Title: Mistrust
| 05 Jun 2013 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter loved the confrontation with Albus
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