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Title: Foreboding 22 Dec 2014 3:38 pm
Reviewer: Calkat22 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the aging was very cleverly done. I'm still anxiously awaiting Harry to wake up. But I am slightly confused as to why Snape is aging and Harry isn't, is it because he's in a coma? I did kind of feel like he was forgotten for a while. But over all I am still loving it and look forward to reading more!
Title: Foreboding 15 Sep 2013 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved how Severus is accepting Molly. Loved the glimpse of Harry and can't wait for him to wake up!
Title: Foreboding 11 Sep 2013 2:47 am
Reviewer: HonorLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For a title, maybe "Growing pains"? That said, I'm loving teenaged!Severus and am eagerly looking forward to him and Harry interacting.

    Only criticism I have is that I feel like Severus deaged mentally too fast. That said, you've done a fantastic job explaining why that is--I just think I'd have taken it a slightly different route.

    Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Title: Foreboding 07 Sep 2013 12:07 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to read more! This is definitely an interesting story line so I'm excited to see how the story progresses. Especially waiting for when Harry wakes up and his reactions to everyone. I wonder if he'll be shy and cowed around everyone, perhaps as a result of the Dursleys?

    Can't wait for more, so please update again soon!
Title: Foreboding 06 Sep 2013 7:59 pm
Reviewer: fiction fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice twist having Severus feel a year more comfortable. I like the angst but it gets tedious after too many chapters.
Title: Foreboding 06 Sep 2013 5:57 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Me encanta como has hecho crecer a Severus en su percepción de la madriguera con su envejecimiento, además de que es simplemente maravilloso como llama tan facilmente mamá a Molly, lindo capítulo

    muero de ganas por ver la reacción de todos a tener un nuevo hermano mayor

    Author's Response:

    Gracias! Sí, los otros Weasleys llegarán en el próximo capítulo por lo que tendrá la oportunidad de ver eso. He utilizado un traductor, así que espero que esto tenía sentido para ti :)

    Gracias de nuevo por la revista!

Title: Foreboding 06 Sep 2013 5:22 am
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Before I forget, I have tell you that I love your artwork/photo. That is the most adorable child!! I love having that image in my mind for a young Harry. So cute!
Title: Foreboding 06 Sep 2013 5:18 am
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It is hard waiting for Harry to wake up but the development of Severus' relationship with his new family does need to happen. I liked the aging process, with his emotional aging going along with it. Well done. I was glad to hear someone else voice a question about all their money and possessions. Hopefully they won't lose everything, including their memories. All that said, I am really enjoying your story! It is a really different approach. Kudos!
Title: Foreboding 06 Sep 2013 1:21 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting.....
Title: Foreboding 05 Sep 2013 10:02 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus has some time with the Weasleys before Harry wakes up or the other children get home. It gives him a bit to adjust to his new situation and age. I'm also glad that aging to 16 seems to have helped his mental state. The idea of having a family seems much more acceptable to him now and I'm looking forward to seeing how he gets on with the other kids.

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