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Title: Little Harry, Big Change 11 Oct 2013 4:12 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Harry climbing in bed with Severus. Maybe Ron could show Harry the chess board and although Harry would be afraid at first by time they finish I bet Harry would be laughing thinking it was funny.
Title: Little Harry, Big Change 11 Oct 2013 1:53 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more.
Title: Little Harry, Big Change 11 Oct 2013 11:25 am
Reviewer: thegirlinthewindow (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the Sev-Harry interactions in the chapter but the nighttime bit was most definitely my favorite. "Keep still or I will feed you beans." Although I felt the Fate bit was a bit weird as she seemed close to a MarySue to me, but the rest of the chapter was awesome.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the feedback. How, may I ask, does she seem MarySue? It's confusing for me, because I know her backstory and have carefully creatred her character though she IS very powerful and thus can do things others can't. Could you help me by explaining what you thought was Mary Sue about her, or what gave that impression?

     Thank you for the review. I liked that part too. Expect more in the future ;) 

Title: Little Harry, Big Change 11 Oct 2013 11:06 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, very very cute little Harry! Good thing Fate gave Snape a piece of her mind,he could easily have wallowed in self pity. And what else has Harry kept from his 11 year old self!? :>)
Title: Bonding with Brothers 22 Sep 2013 1:43 am
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting story.
    And a good cliffy..
    I'm wondering if Harry realy doesn't have any memories at all, or he just hasn't recognized young Severus.
    Privately, I hope for the latter

    Author's Response: Thank you. What you're wondering will be explored, starting with next chapter. Interesting point about not recognising young Severus, though I can't give all the details away at once. Thanks for the review, and I am updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 19 Sep 2013 7:19 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my god!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm dying to read more! Please update again soon, pins and needles here!!!

    Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I'm glad, and don't worry I'm updating now!
Title: The Newest Weasleys 19 Sep 2013 12:51 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, you're breaking my heart! Poor Severus!

    Although, "Severus Weasley" had me laughing out loud. So, I guess it's a good trade off. I look forward to more of Severus and Molly, but especially him and Arthur. Great job.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 17 Sep 2013 7:16 am
Reviewer: aislyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVE. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 17 Sep 2013 5:28 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was really surprised with the end of this chapter. I'm really excited to read the next few chapters. :)

    Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that. Thanks for the review.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 3:38 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very good chapter. I wonder if Severus is seeing Harry as what he would've looked like if he were really his and Lily's son. I hope he falls more into Weasley behavior and allows Harry to call him Daddy and not stuffy Father. Poor Sev- can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Some of the main reasons will be shown next chapter, which I am updating now. Thanks for the review.

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