This first chapter was so immersive that I finished it feeling as if I know so much about this world already. It’s absolutely magical how you do that - introduce us to a story with such depth, detail, and feeling that I feel invested in it from the start. I hope that Harry gets recognized soon, as his anguish is palpable.
| Title: Look Alike
| 15 Apr 2014 3:18 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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| Title: Look Alike
| 15 Jan 2014 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start to the story and an interesting twist with having them both lost thank you
This is an interesting start. Snape is going to have a time with his son Calen. And could Harry really be his son, too? Looking forward to more.
Good scene setter. I like the banner too.
Aw, poor Harry. I hope that things change for him and that Snape realizes that Harry looks like Calen, and thinks about what that could mean.
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