This is a perfect chapter. I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry over the scene with the coins. The juxtaposition of Calen and Harry in the alley was striking. It’s simply a perfect chapter.
Amazing chapter! Poor Harry. The scene between Harry and the Snapes was perfect. Brilliant writing!
| Title: London
| 16 Jan 2014 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I had a lump in my throat while reading this fantastic writing thank you
| Title: London
| 13 Jan 2014 3:50 am
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| Reviewer: ariana (Anonymous)
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severus is too much.. in real situation my dear, harry will distant himself and usually severus will realize about it when it is too late.. or if severus is lucky, he will have to work hard to win harry's heart...i always witness this situation in school...
Author's Response: Because you go to Hogwarts, or because you see kids realizing their teachers are their parents in real life at school? Every person is different, this is fan fiction, and I felt this was an appropriate way for both of them to act considdering their personalities in the books and the situation I've put both of them in. Just becuase my story doesn't follow the same path as most other fan fics doesn't make mine any less believeable if it were to happen in real life. Thanks for the review though 'my dear'.
So Harry really turned out to be a Snape. I wondered how he would get Severus' blood for the spell. At least Harry will be warm and get something to eat now.
Oh wow! I am dying to know how Snape came to be Harry's father.
Great chapter of course!
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