I really enjoyed this chapter. I’m glad that Harry stood up to Calen and called him out on his behavior. It was nice seeing a positive cooking scene for Harry. I wish August had thought more about Calen’s feelings, but I suppose he was trying to bring balance to it all. Overall, a totally lovely chapter. Thank you.
| Title: Christmas
| 19 Jan 2014 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Story is really, really good.
| Title: Christmas
| 17 Jan 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very clever interesting chapter thank you
Oh, dear. Caden is brooding. That can't lead to anything good. Too bad he can't concentrate on all the good things that have happened to him.
Oh dear, a lot of jealousy to work around. For a nice guy, August was a bit tactless.
Oh no!!!
Both sons are feeling vulnerable. I am starting to feel sorry for Calen.
I think that Snape needs to talk to both boys together and tell them that they are now a family and he cares for both of them equally. Well, hopefully he will feel the same for Harry soon, as he does with Calen.
I am glad that it was a nice Christmas.
Good job JA!
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