Loved it great story!!!!:)
| Title: The Best Gift
| 28 May 2014 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: ei2zee (Anonymous)
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I'm glad this ended well.
I almost stopped reading when Calen gave Harry alms, because it's heart breaking and I didn't want to see a child going through that pain. I'm glad I continued reading, though!
To be honest, for a while, I wanted August to adopt Harry instead. It bothered me how Severus could just callously cut a child's hair like that -- he had overstepped his bounds as a teacher because that could've caused a child great trauma. I don't think he acted as a teacher, though. Just a father who didn't know how to protect his sudden child and acted like a big bully.
Snape's good, though. He's not there as a stellar father but he's trying. I think that's enough.
Thank you for sharing a good story!
This is such a good story! I liked the ending, with Severus and Harry coming to an understanding and the hope of a relationship with Calen. Is their any chance you would consider writing a sequel? I really like these characters and would like to see more of them. Well done!
| Title: The Best Gift
| 08 Mar 2014 12:16 am
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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Hard to read as in emotional, especially when his brother denied him and it was just sad, but good.
It was hard to read at times, but I loved it. just like i love all your stories :)
Author's Response: Hard to read? Hard to read because I wrote it badly, or hard to read becuase the content was emotional?
| Title: The Best Gift
| 19 Jan 2014 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Excellent story, good ending, I of course expected it to be longer, I guess just because it was so good.
great story! nicely crafted, you had me frustrated, teary and relieved! I admit to wondering how you could resolve all these issues by the time I got to chapter 8 but I think you have! The little overture from Calen was enough to give hope that things will turn out ok without being unbelievable. Good job!
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