Loved it great story!!!!:)
| Title: The Best Gift
| 28 May 2014 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: ei2zee (Anonymous)
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I'm glad this ended well.
I almost stopped reading when Calen gave Harry alms, because it's heart breaking and I didn't want to see a child going through that pain. I'm glad I continued reading, though!
To be honest, for a while, I wanted August to adopt Harry instead. It bothered me how Severus could just callously cut a child's hair like that -- he had overstepped his bounds as a teacher because that could've caused a child great trauma. I don't think he acted as a teacher, though. Just a father who didn't know how to protect his sudden child and acted like a big bully.
Snape's good, though. He's not there as a stellar father but he's trying. I think that's enough.
Thank you for sharing a good story!
| Title: Look Alike
| 15 Apr 2014 3:18 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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| Title: Falling Through
| 30 Mar 2014 4:46 pm
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| Reviewer: dontellio (Anonymous)
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I need more!!!!!!!!
:) Oh, my heart breaks for Harry.
Amazing chapter! Poor Harry. The scene between Harry and the Snapes was perfect. Brilliant writing!
This is such a good story! I liked the ending, with Severus and Harry coming to an understanding and the hope of a relationship with Calen. Is their any chance you would consider writing a sequel? I really like these characters and would like to see more of them. Well done!
| Title: The Best Gift
| 08 Mar 2014 12:16 am
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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That was so good. In a terrible way I love that you made him homeless. Have you ever read A Little Princess by Frances Hodgson Burnett? It's one of my favorite books and this just seems really reminiscent of a couple of the scenes. Anyway this amazing so far, can't wait to keep reading!
Hard to read as in emotional, especially when his brother denied him and it was just sad, but good.
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