It was hard to read at times, but I loved it. just like i love all your stories :)
Author's Response: Hard to read? Hard to read because I wrote it badly, or hard to read becuase the content was emotional?
| Title: The Best Gift
| 19 Jan 2014 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Excellent story, good ending, I of course expected it to be longer, I guess just because it was so good.
| Title: Christmas
| 19 Jan 2014 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Anonymous)
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Story is really, really good.
great story! nicely crafted, you had me frustrated, teary and relieved! I admit to wondering how you could resolve all these issues by the time I got to chapter 8 but I think you have! The little overture from Calen was enough to give hope that things will turn out ok without being unbelievable. Good job!
| Title: The Best Gift
| 17 Jan 2014 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story and so much time and effort went into it thank you so much!
| Title: Falling Through
| 17 Jan 2014 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow the pace certainly was raised in this chapter great writing.
| Title: Christmas
| 17 Jan 2014 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very clever interesting chapter thank you
| Title: Another Son
| 17 Jan 2014 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: The Manor
| 16 Jan 2014 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Now I feel sorry for them both! Very realistic scene wit August and Harry thank you
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