Nice that Harry now has friends. Its a shame he overheard Snape, although at least the man was trying to say the right things to help his son, which could be a good thing if Harry also turns out to be his.
Good scene setter. I like the banner too.
| Title: The Best Gift
| 11 Jan 2014 7:17 pm
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| Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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I really liked this story. The characters were described well, the story was paced just right and the conclusion was nicely done. Keep writing and maybe in the future we could see more into the developing family as I think the characters have a lot more potential?
I love this story. Of course I cried the whole time.
I love this story. Of course I cried the whole time.
| Title: The Best Gift
| 10 Jan 2014 5:48 am
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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I loved this story - the angsty build up was wonderful - you did a fantastic job with each character's inner thoughts and emotions. Super awesome!
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| 10 Jan 2014 3:49 am
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| Reviewer: Mworth1019 (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Best Gift
| 09 Jan 2014 3:36 pm
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| Reviewer: ANN (Anonymous)
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snape hasn't got anymore sons coming out of the wood works that he don't know about
You finished a fic! it's a miracle! I'm just teasing.
I'm still wondering what wizard Chinese food is like. If British candy include blood flavoured lollipops, Cockroach Cluster, fudge flies, Acid Pops...i don't want to know what the Chinese have.
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