If I had a computer, I'd review every chapter! But having only a SLOW phone, I'm saving it all for the end. -- WOW!!! This is a wonderfully evocative, very powerful story, and I agonized with Harry every step of the way, feeling his sense of isolation, his determination, his frustration, his humiliation, his jubilation, and finally his celebration! He really did receive the best gift(s) of all, and I'm so happy for him. And Severus. And Calen, who might not be as big a git as he often seems, even if gittiness tends to run in the family! Absolutely amazing overall! Well done!
Awesome JA. I adored it. It was written a little differently than you usually write too I believe. Great. :)
This was really cute! It reminded me a bit about My Secret Father and also, for whatever reason, of Field of Broken Dreams, but it's setting is different and though there are similiarities there are also differences.
Aw, that was wonderful JA!!!!
I'm glad that Harry got the best present of all...a father!
Hopefully this is a turning point for the family.
Now Harry will probably get sick too. Darned Calen. I hope that Snape will be okay.
Good chappie.
Oh no!!!
Both sons are feeling vulnerable. I am starting to feel sorry for Calen.
I think that Snape needs to talk to both boys together and tell them that they are now a family and he cares for both of them equally. Well, hopefully he will feel the same for Harry soon, as he does with Calen.
I am glad that it was a nice Christmas.
Good job JA!
Calen sounds like a brat!! I hope he warms up to Harry soon.
Oh poor Harry. He feels so unwanted. Hope that Christmas turns out to be better for him.
Good job JA. Hope this little family can come to terms with these changes.
| Title: The Best Gift
| 08 Jan 2014 7:06 am
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| Reviewer: fringie7 (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! Omg!
I hope that those Muggles get what they deserve!!
Very sad, but I hope that Harry's ending is happy. Good job JA.
I swear, the things that boy get up to...
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