Woow!!!
Que capítulo tan genial, realmente fue impresionante de leer. Transmitiste tanta emoción desde Harry que fue brillante.
Ame este capítulo. El discurso de Harry fue tan emotivo y perfecto
Esperó ver muy pronto el POV de Severus sobre lo que hizo con el niño
En fin.
Gran capítulo
Felicitaciones!!!
The raw emotion is intoxicating, I like your story a lot - Harry has kost everything and yet Snape always rubbed it in, it would make anyone frustrated 😤.
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| 16 Nov 2015 4:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Amazing chapter!! It Made me cry... Can't wait for more!
| Title: Thirteen: Cruelty
| 16 Nov 2015 3:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Pianoparamour (Anonymous)
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Oh, my goodness. Fantastic.
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| 16 Nov 2015 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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This chapter was absolutely brilliant. I am so glad you are writing more at the moment as I can't wait to see what happens next, well done :)
Can i just say that this story is amazing!!! Your writing is great and the plot its self is just brilliant! Keep up the good work!
| Title: Thirteen: Cruelty
| 16 Nov 2015 2:52 pm
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| Reviewer: relative1983 (Anonymous)
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Oh wow, this was so very emotional. Pfft, I am crying right now typing this. you did a really good job to showcase the change from elation to this deep sadness that Harry went through. I am happy that you posted this, although of course now I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what Snape's response is going to be (as well as the students)
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