| Title: Forty-One: Rising Generation
| 16 Nov 2019 8:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Harry’s ideas are good but I agree with Hermione rather difficult to implement. Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Forty-One: Rising Generation
| 13 Nov 2019 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: Feenrai (Signed)
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story! You have done a fantastic job getting me hooked and keeping me attached. So many times a story either doesn't quite catch me, or it rushes it and over does it, but your story has struck a beautiful and delicate balance and pacing. You have avoided making things just suddenly work out, you're adding more conflict as other things resolve, you're allowing tough and tragic things to happen...and I can't put it down! Also, in my far too many years of devouring HP fanfic, I have never encountered teenage Headmaster Harry...this is refreshingly fantastic! I am really glad you mentioned your original work on Amazon in your author notes as I occasionally come across a fanfic author I like so much I wish I could support them in original fiction. You are one such author and I was glad to immediately buy your ebook and I look forward to reading it! Finally, I just checked out your YouTube and I have to also add that your doggos are adorable and if I knew how, I'd send you a picture of my doggy, Severus Neville ^_^ Thank you for the fantastic writing, and good luck with NaNoWriMo!
I am just waiting for our boys to meet up for a significant period of time. Maybe Harry could talk to Sev about spirits?
As a fellow NaNo, I understand your going to an entry other week update. But as a reader who only found your story this week and plowed my easy through all chapters in a few days, I'm sad that I have to wait for two weeks to find out what happens next.
Great job on giving our two heroes a new life together. Keep up the great work!
| Title: Thirty-Four: Friendly Neighborhood Harry Potter
| 29 Oct 2019 10:02 pm
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| Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed)
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Wonderful! Absolutely love, love, LOVE the thought of Harry as Headmaster. And Snape's reaction to hearing the announcement was great. Right down to the "after Severus strangled the boy for this idiocy."
Woah, this has been awesome! I will be eagerly awaiting your update!
| Title: Eighteen: Like the Father Before Him
| 29 Oct 2019 3:08 am
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| Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed)
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Yay! The icy wall between these two is starting to melt. I'm sure that there will still be misunderstandings, tempers, and anger in the chapters to come, but the curse is starting to show the real purpose for which it was intended ask those centuries ago.
Well done!!
Fudge deserved that and more tbh. I absolutely loved Hogwarts speaking through Harry, though I wish it weren’t so tiring for him (he needs his rest!) can’t wAit to see what happens next!
Of course Harry would bottle this up. I hope the books aren’t too much for him to handle on his own!
I’m finally getting a chance to catch up on your fic and oh my god poor Harry. I’m glad he has snape there to help him deal with everything in general but especially this most recent loss. I’m sure snape will be up to the challenge of fatherhood though
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