| Title: Twenty-Three: No Better Protector
| 05 Feb 2022 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Wow, that’s another original twist
Happy to see the action here! Thanks for the great chapter.
| Title: Twenty-One: He Became 'Harry'
| 05 Feb 2022 1:51 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Congrats on your novel! And so happy that you plan on finishing this story. I loved this chapter and am so glad that everything has come to light.
| Title: Twenty: Her Last Detention
| 05 Feb 2022 1:46 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thank goodness for Snape. And thanks for your note on the Black Quill nomenclature.
| Title: Nineteen: Someone Said Otherwise
| 05 Feb 2022 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Noooo, I abhor the toad! You write her so well. I felt doom at the end of the chapter.
| Title: Eighteen: Like the Father Before Him
| 05 Feb 2022 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Yes, this is definitely a unique aspect of your story! I love it, and hope it works out for Harry.
| Title: Seventeen: Life Isn't Fair
| 05 Feb 2022 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Ah, Snape let him suffer. I liked your Cho scene better than the original.
| Title: Fifteen: Misadventures of Treacle Tart
| 05 Feb 2022 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks so much for that scene with Luna. It was perfect. Exactly what Harry needed!
| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 05 Feb 2022 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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