Loved this chapter! Keep writing :)
Severus really is on the wrong track if he think intimidation will work to end the spell. This sounds like it may take some time. And Quidditch practice looms.
| Title: Eight: Into the Frying Pan
| 01 Jun 2014 2:04 am
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| Reviewer: Arik (Anonymous)
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I really have to commend you on the development of this story. It would be so easy (and unrealistic) to have Harry just blurt everything out, as many other authors do. I like Harry's thought process in this story, and Snape is acting so deliciously Snapish. Thanks for the read so far!
Oh the fun they'll have! More please!
| Title: Seven: Extending the Distance
| 30 May 2014 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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| Title: One: The Start of a Bad Day
| 30 May 2014 7:07 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Oh, indeed cause I have a feeling this story will keep me up all night
| Title: Seven: Extending the Distance
| 27 May 2014 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 27 May 2014 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I think I missed reading this when it was posted! Excellent chapter, I love your style of writing, you don't give too long explanations but let the story set the scene and give it it's pathos and tension thank you so much
| Title: Seven: Extending the Distance
| 26 May 2014 2:15 pm
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| Reviewer: M3 (Anonymous)
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Pleas pleas would u update soon? I really can wait anymore :( I'm at work and have nothing to do and opened my phobe to check if u had continued yet...can u uodate soon, pretty please?
| Title: Seven: Extending the Distance
| 25 May 2014 8:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This story is absolutely splendid! I love the idea! Your writing style is great! Update soon?
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