| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 06 Feb 2014 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg!! I loved this chapter.
You have Snape and Harry's character down pat. Great job.
I can't wait for more!
Because Harry isn't the pampered. lazy. spoiled golden boy of Gryffindor. He is the abused, hardworking, malnourished snake in lions skin who is a house elf for his so called family.
| Title: Four: Out of the Fire
| 04 Feb 2014 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely scene between them thank you so much
I am so hooked on this story, I can't even tell you. Throwing Snape into the mix with Umbridge and the Dursleys is one of my all-time favorite setups. You write very well, too, and I think you are keeping everyone in pretty good character. Can't WAIT for more!
Stop leaving us like this....ooh I hate reading unfinished stories...
I shall see you next chapter okay? keep up the good work hun :)
Either Umbridge is stupid or completely blind, cause any other smart person (hell, even an animal!) would have ran for the hills if they made Snape that pissed!
In the description box thing it says that this takes place preOotP but it's actualy during it, so it should probably say preHBP. :)
Lol!!! Yes Snape sure showed her who's boss! I love it! I hope in the next chapter Snape asks Harry what's up about the lines (:
| Title: Four: Out of the Fire
| 01 Feb 2014 7:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Mmmm,
es un excelente capítulo, por Salazar!!!, Umbridge esta loca, en realidad creo que quiere morir como le va a decir eso a Snape.....!!
Fue fascinante, y el principio del capítulo, la debilidad de Harry, eso fue brillante,
sin duda espero que puedas actualizar pronto.
fue un capítulo realmente bueno
| Title: Three: Departure to the Dungeons
| 01 Feb 2014 6:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Ja ja ja
me encanto este capítulo en realidad fue muy bueno, es decir, Severus se ve algo más en control y bueno, Harry encontró el pudo haber sido peor, uggg....vivir con Umbridge!!
En fin, gran capítulo... y la frase de intriga, de que es un secreto cómo Harry sabe sobre pociones que requieren ingredientes humanos, pues wow!!!
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