Harry, Harry, Harry. (Shakes head sadly) You just can't keep your mouth shut. Why bait an enraged Snape, especially when you have to live within 10 feet of the man for a nameless amount of time?
I thought it was funny that Albus let Snape yell at Malfoy for so long and then let him name Draco's punishment. At least, Snape will enjoy that part. I'm wondering what will happen if Snape is summoned by Voldemort. I guess Harry could use the invisibility cloak. I guess I'll have to see what you have in store for our heroes.
Oh dear. I'm sure Snape was ready to use Draco for potions ingredients after using an unknown spell. The consequences of it should make an interesting story.
| Title: Three: Departure to the Dungeons
| 21 Jan 2014 10:46 am
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| Reviewer: Felicia (Anonymous)
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Noooo not a cliff hanger :( can't wait for more.
| Title: Three: Departure to the Dungeons
| 21 Jan 2014 1:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Talk about a cliff hanger ...
| Title: Three: Departure to the Dungeons
| 20 Jan 2014 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I am finding this a fantastic story.
| Title: Three: Departure to the Dungeons
| 20 Jan 2014 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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muhahahahaha Snape is so going to kill him. But, then again Snape has a prearranged thought of how Harry is in his mind and no matter what Harry does its the same as James and Harry is a arrogant, pampered, showoff that doesn't know how to do a lick of a chore if it was presented to him on a solid gold platter.
| Title: Two: You and Me Together
| 20 Jan 2014 12:32 am
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| Reviewer: VioletF (Anonymous)
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This is actually rather lovely and fresh, as uncompliment-ish as it may seem it speaks actually about how how hard is to find new stories in this fandom that still present something new, not just give us the same thing in slightly different form over and over again. I very much enjoy your style of writing and take on characters, which still have their personalities. All in all I can't help but to be excited for the new parts (that I hope you will add soon).
| Title: Two: You and Me Together
| 19 Jan 2014 10:58 am
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| Reviewer: Felicia (Anonymous)
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What a great story so far!!! Can't wait for more.
Albus is really funny :)
Reading this fic made my day - it is so fun! I can't wait to see where you go with this, please keep going!!
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