| Title: Two: You and Me Together
| 13 Jan 2014 3:50 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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That was great, and built on the promise of the first chapter. Love the humour! Dumbledore knows more about this spell than he's telling too - devious old man.
| Title: Two: You and Me Together
| 13 Jan 2014 1:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Ireth Aldarion (Anonymous)
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I need you to update immediately! This was an amazing first chapter. Dragged me right in! I'm dying to find out how they managed all the daily things but most of all Umbridge and her detentions! Bravo!
| Title: One: The Start of a Bad Day
| 12 Jan 2014 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Pearl (Anonymous)
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The challenge is in deed very intriguing and you are off to a fabulous start. I hope you have the plot to a nice long story thought out because there are endless possibilities to how you story can proceed. Please update soon because I want to find out more.
This story sounds very interesting! Can't wait to see more. :D
Oh, this is going to be GREAT, isn't it?
Great start and I'm looking forward to see the continuation!
I always love these types of stories and you're off to a really engaging start! Can't wait for more!
This is a great story, please continue!
| Title: One: The Start of a Bad Day
| 12 Jan 2014 2:37 am
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| Reviewer: oz (Anonymous)
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Excellent beginning, hope you'll post soon the next chapter
| Title: One: The Start of a Bad Day
| 12 Jan 2014 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Brilliant start! Very excited for the next chapter.
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