Parts of this are incredibly painful to read--and what I mean by that is your story is so gripping, and so beautifully described, that you can't help but feel Harry's pain, as if you are really there with him, at all the absurd unfairness of all he has been through/is going through.
And the end of this chapter was simply chilling. I can't help but just despise the Snape you've drawn at this point. In contrast, I love what you're doing with Draco. Perhaps he can be some point of context which can eventually right Snape's perceptions.
Anyway, I can't wait for more!
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| 22 Jan 2014 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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This story just grabs you and keeps your attention right to the end. The various interaction between the characters is well thought of and done nicely. I look forward to the next chapter.
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| 22 Jan 2014 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Shape needs a good kick in the Ares along with a few other teachers I hope th we y find out they were wrong as bout harry
Really love this story, location completely new and different. Like the other schools and different magic subjects, like wandless and meditation.
Pictures and plans are really helpful to story.
Am interested to find out what's happening with Draco, what is Snape going to do next?
Hope this will be a long story, please update soon.
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| 22 Jan 2014 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: AJZ (Anonymous)
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| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Felicia (Anonymous)
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I love it! MORE, MORE, MORE!!
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| 21 Jan 2014 11:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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Ohh I love this story! The Professors and classes habe been nicely invented. (I'm already a Gan fan, such an awesome Charakter!)
I am dreading the next HarrySnape meeting - our potions master will have something terrible up his sleeve for Harry... I am sure of it.
Plesse update as fast as possible!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 10:04 pm
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| Reviewer: emily (Anonymous)
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I have absolutely loves this story. I hope that you don't pause in your updates ( like you have in a number of your other stories that I love) and finish this as quickly as possible. I know its a lot to do, but I have not been able to out this story down today and want the rest asap. Great job!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: 1woof1 (Anonymous)
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I hope Snape confronts Draco and hears the truth. I also hope that the other teachers start doubting Snape. Its time for the truth!!!
wow, its been a while since I have read a harry/snape story where snape has truly no redeeming qualities and Im finding it hard to see how he could turn around. Particularly as this has more to do with his saving face now. Very pleased Harry has a few more teachers on his side though, looking forward to see how this will develop!
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