| Title: A New Schedule
| 19 Feb 2014 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I love it not mundane informative keep up the great writing :)
| Title: A New Schedule
| 15 Feb 2014 10:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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en realidad es bastante agradable leer lo que tu llamas mundano porque da una maravillosa perspectiva de Harry en relación con los otros,
sin duda es interesante que vaya a atener nuevas clases de meditación y que las cosas empiecen a verse si no bien sin duda si mejor
Es un gran capítulo
I was glad to find this new chapter! It is not mundane. I liked it. Update soon, please
| Title: A New Schedule
| 14 Feb 2014 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like the chapter as your thoughts and descriptions of the students are so realistic and bring the story further, thank you
| Title: A New Schedule
| 14 Feb 2014 4:04 am
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| Reviewer: JB (Anonymous)
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I like your story so far. I do not think that describing the classes makes the story mundane, I think it helps with "building" the environment and helps one get to know the different teachers and other students. They are there for the classes, so it would sense that part of the story would revolve around those classes!
Oh, that was wonderful JA. No, it is not mundane; I love learning about the different classes and yes, I like the differences between here and Hogwarts. Just makes a nice change of scenario.
Can't wait for more. Great job.
| Title: A New Schedule
| 13 Feb 2014 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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First and foremost, I love all of your stories. In the scene where Snape asked Harry to levitate the stone, you said Harry was trying to use alohamora to try to levitate the stone. I believe you meant wingardium leviosa.
Besides that hiccup, I noticed no other errors in this chapter.
Looking forward to followibg chapters in all if your work in progress.
Fantastic story. I'm really enjoying the detail of the classes and, of course, Harry's interactions with the other teachers. I also like that Snape is finding it hard to change his own behaviour so Harry's still having problems with his lessons as well. Interested to see how the Harry-Gan relationship develops.
Nice! I like it. The classes are interesting to me, and Harry and Gan have me wanting to meditate! Thanks for the update! Great story.
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