Really like all the school pics, and where you've been going with the interpersonal relationships.
One grammar detail: lead as a verb is the base form and present tense, lead as a noun is a piece of metal. The past tense of the verb is 'led' without the 'a' in it...
| Title: The Other Schools
| 01 Jun 2015 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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I am glad to see more of this story! The premise is unique but fits well into the world of Harry Potter, and I enjoyed all your descriptions of the schools; they all felt special like Hogwarts but unique to their cultures. Harry is such a teenager in this, fragile and readily hurt one moment and fierce and wise in the next. Snape's slow turn-about in attitude, and the way his respect for Harry increases the other professors' respect for Harry, is also interesting. Harry has always been fast allies with people who are very loyal to him but not able to make a dent in larger society, like Ron and Luna, but it seems that Snape has more power to do him either ill or good, so getting Snape to see the real him would be a big deal.
Such a fun read! Thanks for updating.
| Title: The Other Schools
| 01 Jun 2015 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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I am glad to see more of this story! The premise is unique but fits well into the world of Harry Potter, and I enjoyed all your descriptions of the schools; they all felt special like Hogwarts but unique to their cultures. Harry is such a teenager in this, fragile and readily hurt one moment and fierce and wise in the next. Snape's slow turn-about in attitude, and the way his respect for Harry increases the other professors' respect for Harry, is also interesting. Harry has always been fast allies with people who are very loyal to him but not able to make a dent in larger society, like Ron and Luna, but it seems that Snape has more power to do him either ill or good, so getting Snape to see the real him would be a big deal.
Such a fun read! Thanks for updating.
This story is amazing. Every time you update, I feel the need to read the story all over again. Its brilliant. I can't wait for the next update!
I'm not sure if I read that one or not. I'll check it out. :)
I was glad that you included the pictures. I thought they matched well with the various schools. It was nice to have a visual to help with the description. Axle's family was a surprise. I'm glad he was able to be Harry's friend in spite of his father. I'm also glad that Harry and Draco were able to get past their differences. Looking forward to more. Will Harry and Draco stay friends? Will Snape and Camille continue their relationship? How will Snape behave with Harry now?
I really loved the conversation between Harry and August it really hit the Neal on the head...."kindness and respect"...
Can Harry get together with Luna in this story? They'd go great together.
Author's Response: No, I'm sorry :( That was never something I planned for this story. There will be a little romance for Harry but not with Luna. Have you read the other story I wrote here that has a lot of Luna in it? It's not a romantic relationship but you might like it all the same.
| Title: The Other Schools
| 31 May 2015 1:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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Wow.Very nice chapter. I liked the pictures of the schools very much. I can't wait for the next chapter! =o)
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