Wow. It certainly had a lot of stuff we didn't see before, but it was still a great chapter! I love your characterizations of Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Snape. I'm so glad that Ron seems to be growing up, and is thinking more about Hermione than himself. I don't mind the Harry/Hermione take. The characters had it right, it certainly is messy! Great chapter! I love that Harry is working for Snape. I wonder how Harry will earn a broom though, and money for next year. Thanks for the update! I am still really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Did you miss a chapter? Harry got his Firebolt back.
Its really good, I rexkon you didnt entail the two weeks bcuz they were monotonous? Will we be hearing anything abt those two weeks later on?
Love is one big complicated mess.
| Title: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: I KNEW IT! (Anonymous)
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My first reaction when Hermione said "you are"
.... "HAHA!" *claps* "I KNEW IT!!!" and danced in my chair.
I LOVE Harry/Hermione and this was perfectly done.
This was the most excellently written 'triangle' scene I have ever read. It was perfect. I can't even begin to describe how perfect. I normally REALLY dislike triangles, because usually someone is whining about it. LOL. So, fantastic job on this!
Author's Response: Well that's good, becuase I don't think I've ever written a triangle before lol.
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