Hm, sometimes, when there is such a battle and everyone tells Harry to run, he, like a reckless idiot, stays and fights, I don't like it at all, but when you have gone and done the opposite of that, I am wondering if the reckless Harry is better. I didn't even read the whole chapter of Harry being a coward. Though I like the story line of Kahr falling and the mad man attacking Boden. I like the mentality of August now. Harry's arm was hurting, has he splinched himself? The story is good, but I don't think that you have captured the true personality of Harry, anyway, I like it so far. Can you show us something with Severus' P.O.V? I want to know what is going on in Hogwarts. I liked what he did to the bathtub in Privet Drive. Harry is quite powerful. I liked how the conflict of Harry and Ron was solved.
I would like to see Harry fight.
Whatever, are you taking a break? Is it on a indefinite hiatus? When do you plan to update? Its not abandoned, is it? Please promise to complete this story, even if it is 5 years from now, it is good. You will, won't you? I can count on it, can't I?
Author's Response: Harry didn't actually run because he was a coward and afraid of fighting, even though that's what he's been thinking. You said you didn't read the entire chapter. Maybe you should. It does give some insight as to why he ran even though he isn't entirely sure himself why at this point. It's more got to do with Snape than with Voldemort. Harry has too much fear of being a coward or being 'Slytherin-like' to run from a fight or from danger, as evidenced by him jumping in to save August after worrying himself silly over being called a Slytherin and hiding during the tournament. What he's running from is emotional in nature. He ran from Hogsmeade and ended up at the Dursleys, but when he left the Dursleys he wasn't running from anything, he was running towards something, and ended up at Boden. What that is right now I'll leave for you to figure out, though I may clarify in an author's note at the end of the story.
Oh my! Harry is clueless, Hermione likes him, how difficult is it to understand? I liked how you explained Apparation. How did you come up with this theory?
Author's Response: Things like that just come out of my head ;) I have other fan fics I've written on other sites where I've written how apparation works differently. I don't know how I come up with it, it just happens.
oh la la. Beuaxbatons had the arts courses that I liked, otherwise it was average. (Loads better than Muggle schools). The picture of Durmstrang managed to get out a "Whoa" out of me, though I won't want to go there, to strict a rules for me. I liked Boden, it seemed so nice and cosy and somehow closer to nature. Though, I still love Hogwarts more than anyplace in the world, imaginary or real. Literally, if anyone asked what my favourite place on earth was, I would say Hogwarts.
Awww, I really hoped that Harry would win............
Oh la la. Romance among the Gemini trees!
Good, I like the emotional torture of Severus, its always fun! Oh, and I remember one thing, in the first rule for the game Iva had said that no one can use the four unforgivable curses. The Killing Curse, the Cruciatus and the Imperious, which one is the fourth? Or was that a typo?
tah Dah Dah! I loved this chapter almost as much as the last one, I guess a little more..........
Lets see if the other people's behaviour changes towards Harry then.
Oh, by far my favourite chapter. I am glad that Nikolas and Acel didn't win. A good way to insult someone. He basically called them a gorilla.
Wow. This is quite an action-packed chapter. I've spent the past few days reading the story, and really enjoyed watching Harry grow through the adversities that he faced at the summer school. I am really looking forward to reading more, and to seeing how everything will turn out in the end.
Really enjoying this. Wonderful job
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