This is a wonderful story. I like it very much. I wonder for how long you will keep it, if there would be a visit to Axel, or if Ghan will invite Harry as a personal guest (cause I think you kinda hinted), if Draco will get into trouble with Lucius or Voldemort for getting friendly, the same for Snape etc etc. I guess I am trying to say I'm really curious and I'm looking ŕforward to reading more...
| Title: Back To Life
| 20 Oct 2015 3:18 am
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| Reviewer: A. (Anonymous)
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Gah! You had me going with this story. I loved it a lot - so original and well written. But now you had to go and put Hermione and Harry together. Seriously they don't work as a couple at all. Harry is all wrong for her and vice versa. Couples should balance each other out a bit (not that they have to be opposites) and I know what it's like when two people are too similar - fights are inevitable. They just don't work. Ron and Hermione work, or maybe paired with other people, but Harry and Hermione don't work at all.
Author's Response: It's ok lol. It will all work out in the end. Remember that most things written into a story are there on purpose to create conflict in some way. I can tell you I did not write them together because I like them as a pairing or believe they should be together.
| Title: Back To Life
| 01 Jul 2015 4:38 am
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| Reviewer: SnapeFan (Anonymous)
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Loved the whole story so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter, I was to mesmerized by the whole story I couldn't stop! I like your plot and original story idea with the Gemini school and the other characters, especially the professors... Hope you update soon!
| Title: The Isle of Coll
| 01 Jul 2015 3:05 am
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| Reviewer: Jenny (Anonymous)
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What can I say? I loved it
| Title: Back To Life
| 14 Jun 2015 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: The Other Schools
| 14 Jun 2015 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved your wonderful descriptions of the schools very imaginative and the pictures make it even better! Thank you so much
| Title: The Duel
| 14 Jun 2015 4:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and I loved the duel, you have a wonderful imagination for duelling!
Thank you a wonderful chapter, I love the conversation between them such passion and conviction.
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 14 Jun 2015 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to be back in this story thank you for the lovely long chapter! I think I've missed some chapters so I'll have to go back and check
I love Harry's character here - I usually dislike stories where Harry is physically abused by the Dursleys, since I feel the treatment he got in canon causes more than enough trauma, and doesn't need to be dramatized to show how damaging neglect can be. But I like how you keep Harry's determination and wisdom here - he was abused, but maintains his strength of character, which I feel is lost in some stories.
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