| Title: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015 10:39 am
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic:D!! It was kind of cute, how Harry tapsed trough this situation;) I am so happy he asked Snape for advice. I also liek the idea that Harry works the money for his clothes off for Snape. And yeah Harry and Hermione:) Please update really soon!
Wow. It certainly had a lot of stuff we didn't see before, but it was still a great chapter! I love your characterizations of Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Snape. I'm so glad that Ron seems to be growing up, and is thinking more about Hermione than himself. I don't mind the Harry/Hermione take. The characters had it right, it certainly is messy! Great chapter! I love that Harry is working for Snape. I wonder how Harry will earn a broom though, and money for next year. Thanks for the update! I am still really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Did you miss a chapter? Harry got his Firebolt back.
Its really good, I rexkon you didnt entail the two weeks bcuz they were monotonous? Will we be hearing anything abt those two weeks later on?
Love is one big complicated mess.
| Title: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: I KNEW IT! (Anonymous)
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My first reaction when Hermione said "you are"
.... "HAHA!" *claps* "I KNEW IT!!!" and danced in my chair.
I LOVE Harry/Hermione and this was perfectly done.
This was the most excellently written 'triangle' scene I have ever read. It was perfect. I can't even begin to describe how perfect. I normally REALLY dislike triangles, because usually someone is whining about it. LOL. So, fantastic job on this!
Author's Response: Well that's good, becuase I don't think I've ever written a triangle before lol.
Trying to envision Ron at Gemini... Glad that it looks like Draco and Harry might be friends back at Hogwarts, and AWWW, the Firebolt! Fantastic description of Apparition! I'd never even tried to wrap my mind around it; it's just what Wizards DO! Love it!
Truly loved your in-depth descriptions of Beauxbatons, Durmstrang, and Boden. The pics were beautiful! Also loved Axle's mum, and his dad was truly surprising, and I never would've guessed! What really struck me about the visits to other schools was the intricacy with which you had described the cultural differences between the different sets of students. Truly amazing!
Kissing Trelawney!!! Ha! Definitely an image I'd rather not dwell on! Exciting dueling sequences, and I was so glad Harry didn't forget his moonfruit... Or that nobody else had either stolen it or piusonef it sitting there in his room. (My imagination was working overtime!)
Really like all the school pics, and where you've been going with the interpersonal relationships.
One grammar detail: lead as a verb is the base form and present tense, lead as a noun is a piece of metal. The past tense of the verb is 'led' without the 'a' in it...
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