| Title: What He Wanted
| 06 Aug 2014 12:33 pm
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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wow, i love this story! such creativity in all the interesting types of magic at the school, and such wonderful imagery, it really comes alive! can't wait to see how things progress with snape and harry. please keep up the excellent work!
Love it! Thanks for sharing and please update when you can, :)
Cool competition, I like your characterization, :)
haha, if Snape got too nice I wouldn't want to read the story anyway, I don't like out-of-character. ^_^ Nice chapter!
Love the picture! Nice chapter as well, :D
I like your descriptive writing, :) Keep it up!
Another awesome chapter, :) Liking how the story is developing!
Great chapter! :) Thanks for sharing!
Snape scares me in this chapter, I dread (and yet am so excited) to see what will happen next! Awesome writing, :D
Typo here, I think. ( The first team to incapacitate both of their opponents gets the high mark for today. The first team to have both members incapacitated will get a failing mark for the day.)
The second sentence was backward?
Poor Harry, I just want to hug him!
Author's Response: It's just saying the first team wins and the first team out loses.
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