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Reviews For Among The Gemini Trees
Me encanta tu historia realmente planteas un panorama muy interesante, espero puedas publicar pronto
I really love it! It's the best story I've ever read and I NEED more! This is just beautiful.
Also: "It was almost one am" Author's Response: Just as how Hogwarts has students from more than one country, so does Durmstrang :)
The line of the story was pleasant in general, especially characters like Gan. His observations added an interesting flavor into the study. 10 year old duellers was good idea too. Interactions in this story seems to be one-sided though. Snape could be nasty and made an error of judgment. But Harry is not all-clean, and I think some of his assessments about Harry have a part of truth. He can be too reckless, and sometimes thinks his difficulties give him right to act against what he's been told and hopes to get away with it. False accusations against him are unfair, but I can see where assessments of Snape come from. And these thoughts does not make him despicable, as he is entitled to his opinions even if some disagree. These descriptions of angelic victim Harry and despicable monster Snape. It might be appear so now, but views of the latter about the former has a part of truth. Author's Response: You're allowed to be critical. Constructive criticism is always good. Keep in mind though, that like most Harry Potter stories, this is from Harry's perspective, and as a teenager he's not that introspective about how his own behavior in the past may have caused Snape's attitude towards him. To Harry, all he sees as a teenager is another adult being unfair to him. This is a common thread of thought for most teenagers. They often feel oppressed by their parents or guardians and unjustly punished. I never said that Snape wasn't right in some ways, but the story is mostly from Harry's perspective, so the reader is seeing through his eyes, feeling what he feels, thinking what he thinks. As Harry grows and matures it's his job to be more introspective. If I never started Harry out as somewhat in the wrong in the way he thinks, then he would end up being a flat character with no room to grow. Snape has already shown him to be a round character, as he grows and realizes he's been wrong in some ways and admits that to himself and others. He is still growing. So is Harry.
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