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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Day Without Rain 24 Jan 2014 2:55 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why do I get the feeling that those two teachers are going to cause more trouble for Harry. Glad to see Snape coming around.
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, I just really loved these latest two chapters. I loved the fact that Snape realized he was being a jerk. A bitter pill to swallow, but it shows his integrity for owning up.

    I simply adored and melted at the moment that Harry reached out and touched Snape by the wrist, wanting him to stay with him in the infirmary. That was such a beautiful moment.

    I also loved that Snape offered to tutor - even in Occlumency. Good job, Sev! I hope that through it, he learn to be more patient. Good luck, you two!

    I look forward to more! This is an awesome story! :3
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 9:25 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What a nice turn for Harry, getting new things and reconciliation of kind with Snape. I am looking forward to reading about the diner. I guess the things will go downhill there...
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Like the others, this is my favorite story you have written so far! Snape has to be embarrassed that Gan and Adelaide noticed in just a couple of days what he failed to notice in YEARS!
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 7:41 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read this story straight through and really like it. I specially like that Harry isn't ridiculously rich as he seems to be in most other stories.

    But I was wondering where his invisibility cloak is. I don't believe that he would leave it at the Dursley's.

    Anyway, bravo on a great job!

    Author's Response: He's sent his important things to Ron's house for the summer including his cloak and Hedwig.  He really didn't have much anyway aside from his old school books and clothes.  The only thing he's really brought with him are those things and his photo album, but I doubt I'll mention that in the story.
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 4:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Snape!! Finally!
    Okay, he'll never be giving out sugar quills and letting them play games in class, but it's definitely a start. Angst is fine, as long as Snape is starting to see the forest though the trees, or is it the trees through the forest; either way, he is starting to be more human and I like that finally someone is taking care of Harry's needs--even if it IS the evil bat of the dungeons! lol

    Great chapter--as usual, and I can't wait for the next one, which knowing you, won't be long! Yay!
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Does 'banished' mean gone for good? I really wish Harry could get his mom's blanket back - that made me so sad. My mom made me a blanket when I was little and I still have it 20+ years later!
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 12:30 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So sev got the blankets and rug and stuff and albus the supplies?

    Author's Response: Yup.  Harry thinks it's all from Albus though.
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 11:02 am
Reviewer: TheDivinationClassroom (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! This is so good :) please keep writing!
Title: A Day Without Rain 23 Jan 2014 10:20 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter JA! Looks like undoing the damage will be easier said than done. Well done Snape, well done.

    Hey that's not fair at all! Harry didn't even nick those supplies! Grrrr. You know August and Snape have a lot in common.

    Interesting that Snape seemingly had no reaction at all to Harry when he said that defence tactics was one he struggled with because of the unfair treatment. I'll be looking forward that tutoring session Harry has with Snape

    "Much to his chargrin, he also realized the irony, that he was angry at August and Axle for doing the same thing." Axle? Do you mean the other guy?

    thanks JA! you're an awesome writer!

    Author's Response: Good catch HP, I'll go back and fix it.  There's so many characters I get mixed up.  I kept writing Acel for Axle in this chapter.

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