| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 10:04 pm
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| Reviewer: emily (Anonymous)
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I have absolutely loves this story. I hope that you don't pause in your updates ( like you have in a number of your other stories that I love) and finish this as quickly as possible. I know its a lot to do, but I have not been able to out this story down today and want the rest asap. Great job!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: 1woof1 (Anonymous)
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I hope Snape confronts Draco and hears the truth. I also hope that the other teachers start doubting Snape. Its time for the truth!!!
wow, its been a while since I have read a harry/snape story where snape has truly no redeeming qualities and Im finding it hard to see how he could turn around. Particularly as this has more to do with his saving face now. Very pleased Harry has a few more teachers on his side though, looking forward to see how this will develop!
I love this story. The interactions of the various characters with Harry are very interesting. I can't wait to read Snape's revenge to Harry.
Omg!! Poor Harry. I hope that Snape gets to be a little bit less of a bastard.
I know that he is in Canon, but I hope that when they all realise where Harry got the bruises, that he will finally see that Harry is not the spoilt brat that Snape thinks he is.
You really worked like a busy bee all night!! Wow! Great job!
| Title: From The Inside Out
| 21 Jan 2014 12:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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UGH, Snape, you idiot! WHY? Why must I heavily question your intelligence? XD LOL! Haha, Anthy on her phone here, enjoying yet more of this story. I quite barked out laughter when Gan suggested /that/ about Snape. Poor Snape. I thought he had intelligence, but it seems to be clouded by idiocy and a bucket load of pride. Shape up soon, Professor, or you'll look like a bigger idiot than you already do. XD
Keep up the lovely writing. :3
| Title: Professor Horrible
| 21 Jan 2014 11:36 am
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| Reviewer: Felicia (Anonymous)
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I like this story. Don't know why I started to read it now but I'm happy I did :)
Oh, my gosh. I am loving this so much. This is so cool and different. At first, I wasn't too thrilled at poor Harry being poor, but it really adds a different element that I'm liking, too. How nice of Draco to give Harry some stuff. That was really cool.
That teacher, however, doesn't know how to teach drawing. XD You don't hand paper to a kid and say, "Here, draw." Just doesn't teach anything. Having taught drawing myself to a small class of 5 students that ranged from 8 to 16 year olds, the thing about teaching drawing is having success. If you're trying to teach how to draw faces, you start with the basics and teach them how to draw the eyes first - step by antagonizing step. (And of course, they all go at different paces) LOL
However, when I was a child, I attended a drawing class and that teacher didn't teach very much.
So, maybe I'm the only one to teach like that. XD But after teaching for a few years, I found it was the way to go.
Anyhoo, I'm loving the story. What would I like to see? Hmmm, I'd love for Snape to see the bruises on Harry's back. I'd also think there should be a cabin check for cleanliness and Snape discovering that Harry doesn't have the essentials for sleeping. Like, him being all eager to find something wrong with Harry's cabin, only to find it in perfect order and missing things. And, of course, I'd love for him not to be his perfectly nasty self when he sees all this. LOLOLOL.
Author's Response: That was just the first day of class and he wasn't teaching them anything yet. It was just so they could see a comparision at the end of school, of what they used to draw like compared to after they learned everything. I took a drawing course in college and we did that. On the first day we drew a self portrait, and then on the last day we did a self portrait and compared side by side and boy what a difference! I was glad they had us do that :)
When I read about the gifted notebook I was worried Harry was going to be accused of stealing them! But maybe Draco has a redeeming quality? :>) Enjoying the pics you have included by the way! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: read ch 4 :)
great story so far. i think that snape needs to get off his high horse. :)
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