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Title: The Manor Within the Valley 22 Mar 2014 12:26 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 19 Mar 2014 5:46 am
Reviewer: jgroovydaisy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for writing! Looking forward to more. :)
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 18 Mar 2014 11:52 pm
Reviewer: projectja (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hope debris gives Harry a chance as nice soon the poor kid has been through enough.
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 18 Mar 2014 11:18 am
Reviewer: the ever reading one (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is for all three chapters so far this story while not original for reason I can't put my finger on at the moment still feels like something fresh. Also if I must be critical then a warning to keep the story's pace what it is because I have seen it to many time were the first few chapters are good and then they rush thru ever change to canon so they can get the story where they want it to be and then it falls apart for me because there is no bridge between canon and non-canon.
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 18 Mar 2014 5:35 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    the dursleys are mother fuckers and Severus Snape has a stick up his ass.
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 18 Mar 2014 1:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Valley and the manor!! Cool history and descriptions about them. I am so giddy that Snape suspects and is slowly exploring Harry's messed up life. Albus is such a meddler. Serves him right going on a wild goose chase. Your Marge was great. I was a little surprised that the dogs did not notice Dumbledore when he had the spell on - seems like it hides people from animal sixth sense as well, neat. Kari is great. Your Harry and Snape, and Dumbledore are wonderfully in character. Great start to the story so far! Thanks for posting and updating! I am sure I am responsible for at least 4 views of this chapter by myself. I kept coming back to read more.
Title: The Manor Within the Valley 17 Mar 2014 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    You would think that Dumbledore or even Severus ok maybe not Severus with the way his mind is thinking right now but at least Albus would realize that Harry is better off without his relatives if they would just up and abandon him without warning. It just shows how much they cared and loved him. Which is NOT MUCH.

    On a different note that has nothing really to do with the story: Your house elf has the same name as my dog KARI :)

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