Great story. I love how wise Harry is, and how you keep them both in character.
Can't wit for the next chapter.
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| 22 Apr 2014 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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love it so far poor harry more please when y9ou can thank you
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| 22 Apr 2014 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter, perhaps a little of Severus' view point would be good but I can see what you are aiming for at this point. Glad we are getting something of Harry's past but would love to know more and how the Dursleys died.
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| 21 Apr 2014 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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This was a very good chapter and I like your Harry. I wonder if Snape would really be as unobservant as you have him. I would think he would be noticing what Harry is doing more and would be aware he awoke from nightmares and would want answers.
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| 21 Apr 2014 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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I love the way Harry thinks. Great job. I'm hungry for more.
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| 20 Apr 2014 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Fue un buen capítulo, es interesante ver la idea que tienes de Harry adaptandose al mundo mágico desde el libro ya que Snape en realidad no es una fuente así de confiable,
y entiendo el ritmo lento desde que quieres ser realista pero....
Snape es un hombre brillante, ha sido maestro por muhco tiempo y es un Jefe de Casa, así que yo creo que ya se debio dar cuenta de que hay algo realmente irregular y anormal con Harry y debería comenzar a indagar
por otro lado no es convicente que Dumbledore no averigue en el tiempo que Harry se había escapado de los Dursley o lo que sucedia allí,
al fin y al cabo el real Dumbledore siempre tuvo una idea sobre lo que pasaba en Privet Drive
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| 20 Apr 2014 2:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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I like this - a little more independent Harry :)
Interesting story with intriguing plot.
And it definitely has a potential for few interesting between Harry and Severus. However, I hope they will find understandung :)
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| 20 Apr 2014 1:22 pm
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| Reviewer: JDownUnder (Anonymous)
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This is a seriously awesome story!!! Can't believe it's your first. I don't think it dragged at all, because it's so riveting. Please keep going, I can't wait to see where you take it.
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| 20 Apr 2014 10:53 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This is my favorite chapter yet!!! Love the angst. Can't wait for more :)
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