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Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 10:34 pm
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    enjoying this very much! Im liking your streetwise Harry and am looking forward to finding out how he came to be on the streets and when. Snape is obviously trying to avoid any confrontation and acclimitising to Harry's presence but it would be nice for him to start seeing and talking to Harry now? Maybe some Snape POV?

    Author's Response:

    Some Snape POV soon to come :) Thanks for your review!

Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am truly intrigued by your portrayal of Harry. Snape is in true form, isn't he? Looking forward to more.
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 9:11 pm
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm just amazed by Harry. He's wisely kept his temper. Most authors have him suddenly turn on Snape in anger by this point, and I like that you didn't. Harry's conditioning by the Dursleys should hold firmly, even in the face of nice!Snape. Harry "knows" adults are devious and evil and want to catch him in a behavior for which they can punish him. Snape's just trickier than the Dursleys.
    Harry has the right idea about finding out what he needs to know by reading books, so he doesn't have to talk to anyone about his questions. He's also surer to get the truth from books, instead of the slanted version he's likely to he told "for his own good."
    I see you're having Snape get small glimpses of Harry as Harry, not TBWL or James' son. I can't wait to see how this goes from here!
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 5:45 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting to find out more of what makes Harry tick. Snape remains an enigma, and surprisingly disinterested in his visitor although maybe that's just because Harry is behaving and making good use of the library.
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 11:50 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. :(
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 11:37 am
Reviewer: ilreies (Signed) [Report This]
    you're got me holding my breath in anticipation for the next shoe to drop on Harry! O:

    oh dear dear dear. how is Snape managing through these? are we gonna have Snape's POV or is this gonna be solely in Harry's? i don't mind either just wondering (:

    Author's Response: There will be some Snape POV pretty soon, he's fun to write :) Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you're enjoying.
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 10:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh! Your writing style is wonderful, very descriptive and leaving out just the right amount of details to make the reader curious. I love it! Looking forward to more chapters :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate that, it's great to know that you enjoy my writing, and very encouraging since I'm new at this.
Title: Too Good to be True 19 Apr 2014 6:25 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry

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