| Title: Shattered Glass
| 30 Apr 2014 6:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Severus' point of view was interesting, though I do prefer Harry's. More interaction next chapter will be splendid. This story is absolutely brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 30 Apr 2014 7:22 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Good story!! I am assuming that Harry went to London long before his guardians died? Waiting anxiously to get off the cliff . . . .
Author's Response: Yeah, that's why he didn't know they had died when Dumbledore found him.
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 30 Apr 2014 7:00 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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interesante ver la perspectiva de Severus, lo que el esta sintiendo con Harry en su casa
y lo que piensa hasta ahora del niño
Author's Response: I love reviews so much that I put your reviews throught google translate. Thanks!
Please don't apologize for the lack of interaction at this point. Oddly enough, I think that the story has been perfectly balanced and that much more interaction would have been too much at this point. I look forward to seeing things start to change.... :D
Author's Response: Thank you! It's hard to find the balance between writing realistically and dragging out the story too much, so that's good to hear.
Severus seems to have realized that Harry is not his father. Hopefully, he will be able to start to get to know the boy now. That is if Harry is willing. They are both so suspicious that it may take time. Next chapter sounds like it could be the start of it. Looking forward to more.
Great so far, even with a cliffy lol
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 29 Apr 2014 8:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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It's interesting to read, even if action develops slowly. I only hope, it won't be too slowly :)
On the other hand - better slower changes in perception and more plausible changes between Severus and Harry relationship, than something psychologically unrealisstic.
I will be waiting for next chapters :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I do aim more for realism and internal thoughts than action, but the first big scene is coming up in the next chapter, so stay tuned!
Great story and I can't wait to see how it will turn out! I wonder what happened? Will Harry get in trouble now? Or did someone manage to get through the wards and get to him? Please update soon, I'm really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love your stories, btw, so it means a lot that you're reading mine. I'm really glad you're enjoying.
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 29 Apr 2014 5:02 pm
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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This was an excellent chapter and I liked getting to see what Severus is thinking. Can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 29 Apr 2014 2:55 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great update - I enjoyed reading of Snape's views.
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