yay thanks for the update! have been waiting to find out what had happened to harry! i'm glad snape has finally finally notice something odd is going on with harry and wants to find out! i just wish he won't hurt harry even more in the process. good work!
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Me encanto!!!
Sencillamente me fascino este capítulo, puedo decir con sinceridad que no estaba esperando para nada que Severus fuera a ponerse violento pero fue genial, la culpa y la vergüenza fue brillante
Ahora bien, el hecho de que Harry se haya dado cuenta de las parcelas de Dumbledore es impresionante, me encanto la idea!!!
Realmente espero que siendo tan brillante como es y empeñado en descubrir lo que sucede Severus se de cuenta del pasado de Harry y lo que Dumbledore esta haciendo
En fin,
maravilloso capítulo
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Off to google translate...
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 5:16 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This is great. love your Harry and I love you Snape. This is very well written.
I love that this is so goodd and everyone is in character! =]
Snape seems in character to me. He hated James Potter and it seems likely that he would have been furious with Harry's outbreak of accidental magic. It's going to be hard for him to get Harry to trust him though. Harry doesn't trust easily and after Snape's actions, it's going to take even more time.
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: Fiona (Anonymous)
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Wow, you write really powerful interactions. I wonder where Harry picked up his advanced vocabulary. I can't wait to see how the story progresses. I hope he doesn't take Severus' softening as a reason to ease up on Dumbledore and second guess his earlier conclusions about him. But then again, Harry seems to savvy for that. Kudos on a job well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Harry picked up his vocabulary simply from reading, as mentioned, he spent a lot of time in libraries growing up. You're definitely right, Harry won't be easing up on anyone anytime soon ;)
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: cinderella (Anonymous)
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No, I did not expect that. Wow, what an outburst of accidental magic! Harry seems to have the potential to become a very powerful wizard (as also his controlled wandless magic indicates). A lot of emotions in this chapter! I totally understand Harry's reaction, in particular i light of his background, although I hope that he is wrong, and that Dumbledore is not aware of the Dursley's abuse of Harry, or his life on the streets. Snape schock is very realistic, and he is definitely in character, I recognize canon Snape in your portrayal. Snape seems now to suspect that Harry has been abused, and in intent on helping him. I am glad tha t he now sees Harry as the child he is, and his own person,not as the prodigy of James Potter. I am looking forward to more Snape-Harry interaction in the next chapter, as Snape, I am curious to find out more about Harry's background. Keep up the good work!
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 1:49 am
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I liked this chapter. Snape was definitely in character and is finally questioning what is really going on. Harry's unexpected magic is a great trigger. It was very well done.
Woah, intense chapter. I'm not surprised that harry doesn't understand. Poor kid, he's quite messed up. Didn't Snape wonder how Hary knew to fix his own shoulder? That's painful to fix, isn't it? Loved the chapter. Thanks for the update!
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