| Title: Part of the Plot
| 17 May 2014 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Fue un capítulo mu bonito, fascinante las estrtegias de severus para asegurarse que Harry realmente omara la poción,
y es linda la forma en la que el comienza a confiar poco a poco en la personalidad de Severus, si bien no entiende sus razones
en fin
maravilloso capítulo,
espero que puedas actualizar pronto
To be honest I don't blame Harry for being cautious of anything an adult does around him. He hasn't had an adult done anything "good" for him ever. I think Snape is taking an interesting approach to giving Harry his potions and also he is teaching Harry in a way. I hope the trust comes soon.
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 17 May 2014 4:20 am
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| Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I'm greatly enjoying the story. Hope Harry learns to trust Snape at least a little before the summer ends. The potion making was fun.
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 17 May 2014 2:55 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love your writing, and the plot is great. The story is going at a realistic pace, which I appreciate. What a great idea to have Harry brew/watch the brewing of his own potions. Great work! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I thought that having Harry brew was a very Snapish way of being nice.
Severus is making real effort to gain Harry's trust. It may take a while but Harry does seem to have the beginnings of trust. I liked the brewing scene. It was a good way for Harry to see what Snape's intentions were and Harry enjoyed it.
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 17 May 2014 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I liked this chapter and I like that Harry is now getting confused. Your characterizations are very well done.
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