Hmm I bet Jade comes to Hogwarts
I very much liked Jade, brief though her appearance was. Hope you can have her appear in the future.
The talk about science was interesting ... hope you explore the ideas further.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like Jade; I like her too, though I take no credit for her character, as she appeared in my head fully formed. I do have a few more scienific discussions in mind, so stay tuned.
I was glad Jade showed up. It added some interesting details to Harry's life and some depth. I like the civil Snape. He seems more than willing to teach and work with Harry which should help in gaining Harry's trust. Though what happens after he learns about what Harry went through should be interesting.
| Title: The Safe Place
| 24 May 2014 5:42 am
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I liked the chapter a great deal. It was good to progress their relationship and to give more insight into Harry's thinking.
| Title: The Safe Place
| 24 May 2014 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh, I really like your addition of Jade to the story. What a great way to enrich Harry's back story while giving him a believable safe place to go to for Occlumency. I really love this story. Kudos!
Loved the chapter. Really hope to see jade again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the chapter; I did enjoy writing it. About Jade, you'll just have to keep reading...
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