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fue un gran capítulo, sin duda dibujas un horror muy terrible para Harry en su pasado, y sin duda, es una suerte que Vernon esta muerto porque cuando Severus lo descubra.............. Me encanta como Severus va dando ese confort suave a Harry, y como el niño comienza a aceptarlo despacio, es impresionante, hermoso capítulo Author's Response: Off to google translate. Again. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you pointing out that you like that I didn't go into detail. It was pretty tough tough to write just enough to let readers know what happened without giving too much detail.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm not quite sure what you mean, in that the author doesn't understand abused children. In what sense does that show in my writing? I appreciate constructive criticism, and if something is unrealistic, I'd work on it, but you weren't all that clear in your criticism. Would you mind expounding upon your comment?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's really good to hear that you think I've done a good job writing my characters.
Author's Response: Thank you! There's some pretty intense stuff coming up soon, so stay tuned. And when Snape finds out... well, that'll be fun.
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review makes my day as well!
Author's Response: Wow. I almost made you cry? Thank you! That's a real compliment, it means I've done my job right ;)
Author's Response: yeah, for the most part. All in good time. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really glad you liked this chapter. Yes, unfortunately for you, I did take your advice into account, but this chapter didn't have a cliffie... was that considered a ciffie? I didn't think so... hmmm... I guess the evil comes so natually that I didn't even notice ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Oh, yes, when Snape finds out the details, I've no doubt that all hell will break loose... But Mrs. Figg. Dear old Mrs. Figg. I wouldn't bet on her providing any information. Where the hell was she in canon? That's what I'd like to know. Yeah, Dumbles probably would've done nothing, anyhow, but still... |
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