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Title: In the Dark Room 05 Jun 2014 4:32 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okey..........

    fue un gran capítulo, sin duda dibujas un horror muy terrible para Harry en su pasado, y sin duda, es una suerte que Vernon esta muerto porque cuando Severus lo descubra..............

    Me encanta como Severus va dando ese confort suave a Harry, y como el niño comienza a aceptarlo despacio,

    es impresionante,

    hermoso capítulo

    Author's Response: Off to google translate. Again. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 5:02 pm
Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a good chapter and well written. I like that you didn't go into detail about the abuse.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you pointing out that you like that I didn't go into detail. It was pretty tough tough to write just enough to let readers know what happened without giving too much detail.
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked Harry thinking about what a normal family should be and the contrast with his reaction to the dark closet. This is the thing I don't think the original author understood about abused children, how long the recovery is if there ever is one.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm not quite sure what you mean, in that the author doesn't understand abused children. In what sense does that show in my writing? I appreciate constructive criticism, and if something is unrealistic, I'd work on it, but you weren't all that clear in your criticism. Would you mind expounding upon your comment?
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, great story. I love the internal side to Harry-- his distrust, intelligence, fear. With Snape, I like the human touches-- he's harsher than he means to be, then he's clearly shocked and worried. And the author doesn't just state those things, they are revealed in actions or the way the character speaks. It's great.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's really good to hear that you think I've done a good job writing my characters.
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a brilliant chapter, well done! I can't wait to see what happens next and when/how Snape finds out about Harry's past.

    Author's Response: Thank you! There's some pretty intense stuff coming up soon, so stay tuned. And when Snape finds out... well, that'll be fun.
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 2:32 pm
Reviewer: bones (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your writing style. You make my day every time I see an update to your story!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Your review makes my day as well!
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 2:21 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I nearly cry with every new chapter. Your story is wonderfully written and I think Snape is very much in character. Thank you!

    Author's Response: Wow. I almost made you cry? Thank you! That's a real compliment, it means I've done my job right ;)
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 1:25 pm
Reviewer: ange29000 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, will Snape know about Harry's past before school start?

    Author's Response: yeah, for the most part. All in good time. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 10:45 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cant believe you. Really. What kind of evil author are you, ending all your chapters with evil cliffhangers? (I think i gave some advice on this actually, a few chapters back. I knew I'd regret it.) But really. One of your best chapters, along with the first three. Its summer now, so you'll have less excuses not to update ;) UPDATE, PLEASE!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really glad you liked this chapter. Yes, unfortunately for you, I did take your advice into account, but this chapter didn't have a cliffie... was that considered a ciffie? I didn't think so... hmmm... I guess the evil comes so natually that I didn't even notice ;)
Title: In the Dark Room 04 Jun 2014 9:27 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent update. Things are moving along, though I hope that Snape starts investigating a bit, though there might not be much evidence left in the muggle world, unless Mrs Figg knows anything.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Oh, yes, when Snape finds out the details, I've no doubt that all hell will break loose... But Mrs. Figg. Dear old Mrs. Figg. I wouldn't bet on her providing any information. Where the hell was she in canon? That's what I'd like to know. Yeah, Dumbles probably would've done nothing, anyhow, but still...

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