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Reviews For To Trust
oh hope you dont mind me pointing it out but i did spot a typing error: "Harry figured that there must me a numbing aspect of the spell" > must me -> must be? other than that, i can't wait to read about how Snape feel about what happened to Harry in this chapter! (: Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! I'll definitely go back and fix it. After a while, it's hard to notice your own errors...
Anyway other than that we both are really enjoy reading this. We both really like how you portrayed Snape and Harry. Snape seems carry without being out of character, and Harry's comments are interesting and often amusing. The way that Harry is building trust in Severus is done really well too, as it's going at a more believable pace and not rushed like in a lot of fanfics I've read. I'm really impressed. :) Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad to hear that I haven't lost a reader. I did respond to your previous comment; I don't know if you noticed, but your cousin won't have to worry about any graphic details. It's really good to hear that you like my portrayals of Harry and Snape, and that you think the pace is believable.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I was really looking forward to posting that ending, it was my favorite part, personally. I'm glad to hear that I'm not alone in my sentiments :)
Author's Response: Thank you! That was just what I was going for, with the ending, so that's great to hear.
Lets hope that the truth gets out soon and that Harry will receive some much needed help Author's Response: Yeah, I've put Harry through quite the wringer, haven't I? But things are getting better, and Snape is learning on the job. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like the story's development. Yes, Harry is learning, slowly but surely. I've found it interesting, and difficult to portray, that as smart as Harry is, he's so lacking in basic knowledge and understanding of healthy individuals as a result of his childhood. Snape will change that.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I never even meant for this chapter to be so stressful, originally, but that's how it happened. And considering what Harry's been through, his distrusful nature is going to make it really difficult for Snape to get anywhere with him, and it will probably drive some readers crazy, besides.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I do know how frustrating it is to wait ages for an update, so I do try. (Plus I wouldn't want people to lose interest, so I am being strategic, or Slytherin, as some would say). Another update soon to come.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Sev will find out eventually, but the Dursleys are dead, remember? ;)
You are a wonderful writer. Your character development of Harry seems to be on pace with enough of a mystery to keep reader's attention. Snape is lacking but I am sure that will change when Harry begins to trust him more. All in all, awesome Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, if the Dursley's weren't already dead... Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like my writing and character development. It's so good to hear things like that, since this is the first piece of writing I've ever had others read. |
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