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Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 7:23 pm
Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah I'm so excited for the new chapter!! It was excellent. You are doing an excellent job illustrating the interaction, the slow building of companionship and trust, even drawing out the correct parts. I can't wait for Harry to finally start spilling his guts to Severus! (assuming that eventually happens - don't mean to affect where you're taking this)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Harry will be revealing some things to Snape, but it certainly won't happen all at once.
Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 7:02 pm
Reviewer: Paradigm (Signed) [Report This]
    It's just.. an awesome chapter. Thank you so much!
    Thanks for the update!=3 I wonder if you could let me translate it into Russian one day, it's such an amazing and warm story!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! About the Russian, that's an interesting idea, maybe when the story's complete we can talk. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, it's a great follow up to terrible cliffie. I feel compelled to mention that some of the other reviewers of this story are *really* harsh; I hope the author doesn't take them too much to heart. The story has been developing very well. I like that Harry is so deeply conflicted about Snape and about living in general. I like that we are experiencing Severus's personal conflicts as well-- I'm wondering if he's going to start hovering around Harry? Well, there's bound to be some stress response to something as overwhelming as a suicide attempt.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! Don't worry, none of the comments have been rude, just mainly contructive criticism or opinions. I'm not bothered by that :) But thanks for the vote of confidence; I do appreciate it. I'm really glad you noticed and appreciate the conflicts in the story, as it is difficult to get right. Yes, Snape will definitely be more attentive to Harry, though I wouldn't call it hovering. Stick around :)

Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you like it.
Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 6:33 pm
Reviewer: thegirlwhodreamed (Signed) [Report This]
    brilliant brilliant brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: How to Save a Life 16 Jul 2014 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY UPDATE! I was so upset at the sever crash issue D: and yay, angsty climax (I think) snape's pep talk near the end didn't really seem canon snape-ish and his actions a bit unrealistic , but then again, he's taking to a younger Harry. Just thought I'd put that out there. :) besides that, great writing as per usual :) hopefully, you'll update soon and the site won't crash again :) ps- have you noticed all the reviews I've given have a :) in it? I've only just noticed myself lol

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, that scene was a bit different from what one would expect from Snape, but who knows how canon Snape would have reacted had he come to care for Harry before Hogwarts? It's all up for speculation :) Yo do like smiley faces, don't you? :) :D :O B) Next chapter should be up soon.

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