Thanks for the update!
Was Snape's hesitation before offering Harry the use of his broom and also his gruffness due to the fact that it reminded him of James Potter?
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| 25 Jul 2014 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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he can fly instead of hurting himself. :)
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| 25 Jul 2014 5:22 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Perfect ending to an amazing chapter :)
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| 25 Jul 2014 2:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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That was an uplifting chapter after all the angst of Harry trying to commit suicide! I'm glad to see he is trusting Snape more and more not to hurt him. Now I just wonder when/how Snape will find out about Harry's past. Good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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| 25 Jul 2014 2:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This chapter may be my favorite yet, but they're all so good it's hard to judge. I love that Harry has found release and flying. This story is developing incredibly well. You are a brilliant author.
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| 25 Jul 2014 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fiona (Anonymous)
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I loved this chapter. It was very emotional, but ended on a touchingly light note. I hope we hear Harry's laugh more. I wonder, was Snape able to hear it from the ground, and, if so, what was his reaction?
Can't wait for the next chapter.... Enjoying your story.... 😊
I'm glad Harry's feeling more positive. No doubt, Snape is, too. Harry has a long way to go but at least the flying is a start.
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