Severus is making real effort to gain Harry's trust. It may take a while but Harry does seem to have the beginnings of trust. I liked the brewing scene. It was a good way for Harry to see what Snape's intentions were and Harry enjoyed it.
| Title: Part of the Plot
| 17 May 2014 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous)
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I liked this chapter and I like that Harry is now getting confused. Your characterizations are very well done.
It is so interesting how you have portrayed Harry. The Boy-Who-Lives and everyone assumes they know him. but, no one does. No one has even asked about the death of the Dursleys or why Harry was in London. Awesome story.
| Title: Just a Child
| 11 May 2014 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So glad for their interaction. Great chapter I hope Harry has a confrontation with Dumbledore and tells him to get away, can't stand the man!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Dumbledore may possibly show his face again sometime soon, so stick around.
| Title: Just a Child
| 11 May 2014 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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I love the detail you have put into this! I can't wait to read more!!
| Title: Just a Child
| 11 May 2014 8:31 am
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying this story line! Very well written, great internal thoughts from both Harry and Snape. Harry is smart! Hopefully smart enough to open up a little bit to Snape. Snape is smart, too, enough to start to see what's going on with Harry. Fantastic job! Keep it up!
I like that Snape keeps making mistakes around Harry because he has so many internal issues with him, but that Snape is also rational enough that he is realizing that they are mistakes. It makes him very human that he acts, then has regrets and sometimes the guilt means that he doesn't do what he should and go after Harry to apologize.
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 12:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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I like this chapter very much :)
For me, Snape was in character enough. And I like his behaviour, especially his tries of explaining himself (and apologies). I hope for more interactions in next chapter and maybe Harry also will be more forth-coming, enabling Severus to uncover some of Harry’s past.
Waiting for next chapters and wishing you all the best,
Lea
| Title: Just a Child
| 10 May 2014 10:57 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Yay! Update!! Great writing, as per usual, i loved what happened in the library. Dramatically awesome ;) I also like how Snape simply left after he said his part after Harry's nightmare; unlike typical fanfics where he stays and comforts him. However, i felt like Shape's POV near the end seemed a bit, just a bit, choppy. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
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