| Title: Too Good to be True
| 08 May 2014 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: cinderella (Anonymous)
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Hi, thanks for a really great story/chapter! I'm hooked, there is a somewhat slightly sarcastic humor in your story, your Harry is intriguing, and quite different from the canon Harry, I assume he has lived on the streets for a long time, and that has imade him different, but overall, his personality. calcuative mind, pursuit of knowledge and great love for books and learing seems to me rather Slythering or Ravenclaw, I bet your Harry is not gonna be a Gryffindor, but that's fine with me. Generally, I find AU stories, where Harry's house differs from canon, the most interesting fanfics.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love your feedback.
You have nothing to apologize for, save the nasty cliffhanger, and you can right that wrong by updating quickly. :) I like the story the way it is, too much drama, too many sick days, too much hospital wing, too much torture or too many attacks of any kind ruin a story for me. Some is necessary and good to read, but establishing a norm first and in between is what makes a story great. You do that very well. Now, dare I hope that a new update is pending at this very moment?
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like how the story's turning out. I get bothered by too much action and horror as well (and I'm not great at writing those type of scenes) Expect an update within the week :), sooner rather than later.
Excellent story! I like your version of Harry very much. I really can't wait to see the things that come next in his life, such as his impression of Hogwarts and its denizens and whether his relationship with Snape will evolve into something more or less than tolerating each other.
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 05 May 2014 11:02 am
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| Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous)
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Wow! Amazing story so far!
Hope the wait isn't too long with this cliffhanger!
Author's Response: It won't be :)
I really enjoyed finding out Snape's thoughts on Harry, and some of his history. I especially liked how the revelations were interspersed with his potion brewing. Hope the next chapter will be along soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my little potions addition :)
Typically, I try to refrain from demanding chapters-- I worry it seems childish and rude to ask for more from someone who is doing a wonderful thing for free. But with that cliffhanger?! Argh! Want chapter! See, I do sound like a toddler....
Author's Response: :) Feel FREE to demand all the chapters you want, because it means you like my story, and that is very encouraging. Don't worry, there won't be a long wait till the next chapter.
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 01 May 2014 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: midnightaoi (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy your way of writing. Giving them enough time to ponder over the reactions each them displays is a clever move since nothing is more angsty than imagination and you give them this room:-) I guess Harry has used magic and failed? ;^) sry for my English, no native:-)
Author's Response: Thank you! About Harry, you'll have to wait and see what happened ;)
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 30 Apr 2014 11:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good well written chapter. I hope we have the Harry backstory soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll be getting the backstory gradually, but it's coming.
| Title: Shattered Glass
| 30 Apr 2014 6:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Severus' point of view was interesting, though I do prefer Harry's. More interaction next chapter will be splendid. This story is absolutely brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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