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Title: Shattered Glass 29 Apr 2014 9:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Noooooo why such an evil cliffhanger? Such a good chapter! You're a very talented writer, im anxiously awaiting your next chapter! Also, i like your portrayal of Harry. Unlike most fanfictions, he's reserved, hiding all the symptoms as best as he can, and basically being out of sight. I really want to stress the importance of this because this is how abused children act in real life. Very rarely does one let slip their deepest secrets while yelling at an adult. So yeah, good job and post the next chapter soon please! :D

    Author's Response: Haha. Don't worry, I don't plan on making cliffies a regular habit, I just had this one planned for a while. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry. I'm trying really hard to keep things realistic, so thanks for that.
Title: Shattered Glass 29 Apr 2014 8:00 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no what happened to Harry? Lets hope that (lets say he is fine and only dropped a glass, which doesn't explain the vibration from probably something heavy hitting the floor like a body)that Severus doesn't yell at him for ruining his potion.

    Author's Response:

    ;) If I were you, I would assume that Snape will have a lot more on his mind than ruined potions when he finds out what happened. I'm not saying anything, just a suggestion ;p Thanks for reviewing! I love feedback.

Title: Too Good to be True 29 Apr 2014 1:15 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good Story. Thanks!
Title: Too Good to be True 28 Apr 2014 7:03 pm
Reviewer: helhjem (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story and can't wait for next chapter. Keep up the good Work :o)
Title: Too Good to be True 27 Apr 2014 6:14 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an excellent story!!!!!!! I am definitely hooked. I want to find out all the details of how old Harry was when he left the Dursleys, how he survived, when he learned to control his magic to some extent, etc. etc. I am also very curious as to what Snape is thinking, but understand that in your prerogative as the author, that I may not find out. But excellent story.
Title: Too Good to be True 25 Apr 2014 6:28 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An intriguing story so far. You've done well in sketching a picture of Harry's past, but not filling it in with so much detail that there's nothing more to look for and learn.

    You've done an excellent job in keeping the POV all from Harry's perspective, which is something that very few first-time fanfic writers manage. Well done!

    I look forward to the next installment, and I do hope to see at least a little bit of interaction between Harry and Severus in the next chapter.

    Keep up the fantastic work!
Title: Too Good to be True 24 Apr 2014 5:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised that Snape hasn't found out about Harry's nightmares. He must not have the room monitored which is a little odd for our paranoid potions master. Your young Harry is an interesting character. He seems smart and curious enough to give Hermione a run for her money.
Title: Too Good to be True 23 Apr 2014 6:35 pm
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! Wonderful details, you nailed the emotions and questions that must be swirling in Harry's head. I can't wait for more Snape/Harry interaction. The angst is great!
Title: Too Good to be True 23 Apr 2014 3:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I love how wise Harry is, and how you keep them both in character.

    Can't wit for the next chapter.
Title: Too Good to be True 22 Apr 2014 5:37 pm
Reviewer: thejayfeatherluver (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful story

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