Title: Good Instincts?
| 13 Apr 2014 2:15 am
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Reviewer: jaylen (Anonymous)
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Wow. Great start. I love Harry's jaded attitude. Can't wait for him to interact more with Snape. Really looking forward to seeing where you are taking this.
Title: Good Instincts?
| 13 Apr 2014 2:15 am
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Wow!!!
Me encanta esta idea que estas montando, este Harry ya viejo y cansado del mundo pero aun un niño, es impresionante
y el detalle del puñal y el "cuando yo muera fue genial"
espero actualices pronto
Title: Good Instincts?
| 13 Apr 2014 1:44 am
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Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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This is a great beginning. You left me with a lot of questions and I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Streetlamps
| 13 Apr 2014 12:35 am
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Reviewer: madge (Anonymous)
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I liked your descriptions of the alleyway and how Dumbledore used the deluminator.
Fabulous. I love the lack of information. It leaves me wanting to read more.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...You have a new fan!
Oh yeah, and Welcome to the site!
Title: Good Instincts?
| 12 Apr 2014 11:33 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is off to a great start! I hope you update quickly. Dumbledore and Snape are very much in character, and poor Harry. I'm very curious about how he ended up in London — did he run away? Was he dumped there by the Dursleys? I can't wait to read more!
I really like the way you are telling this story -its interesting and easy to read , so I hope you can keep it up. I'm looking forward to seeing how Snape and Harry's first day together goes. Harry is certainly not the little boy that Snape might have been expecting.
Good start. I thought you wrote Dumbledore perfectly, and left enough questions about Harry's situation to make me keen to read on.
Hee hee, Dumbles hasn't changed, still has a sweet tooth. Poor Harry, he is so jaded, even at a young age.
Nice start to the story. Can't wait to see where you are going with it.
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