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Title: Cracks in the Foundation 29 Dec 2014 9:43 am
Reviewer: Raven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Don't try to butter me up. It won't work.
Title: The Safe Place 29 Dec 2014 6:24 am
Reviewer: Raven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How did the Dursleys die?
Title: No Matter What 26 Dec 2014 12:13 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I loved their interaction and how Severus helped Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter and Dumbledore put in his place!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The coming Dumbledore scene is definitely satisfying, in my opinion ;)
Title: No Matter What 25 Dec 2014 2:26 am
Reviewer: RLara (Signed) [Report This]
    I usually don't write reviews, but I really like your story and I want more. Hahahah.

    I just read all the chapters, so I guess I'll just leave my general impressions about the characters and such.

    I think you've found a nice way to depict Snape. Usually he grows too soft on fics, but you've managed to keep him perceptive and stern enough that I can still picture him being as mean as he generally is in Hogwarts.

    As for Harry, I guess because he doesn't have the usual innocence, he seems more Slytherin then usual (or maybe just less Gryffindor), but that’s alright. I do find him a bit too smart and curious. However I’m more than willing to go along with it as it allows for all the scientific background plus this intelligence based connection/relationship and the interesting conversations between the two of them.

    For some reason I cringe every time Dumbledore shows up. I guess it's because Harry hates him so much and I can't help but feel he is too stupid for not having realized all that was going on. While he is a very "anything for the greater good” kind of character, this is so dumb I feel like there’s reason to agree with Harry on that conspiracy theory of his.

    About this chapter, it is very nice. It feels like the end of something, beginning of another stage. I wonder how far you intend to go on the story. I imagine it would all be quite different, in Hogwarts and all, I’m curious.

    Anyway, just my first impressions. Sorry for the long text. I didn't really know what to write, but since you seem quite fond of reviews I'm trying to be encouraging.

    Well, happy holidays!

    Hope you write again soon =]

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't apologize for a long review, I love it :) I really appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Snape; it isn't easy as he's such a complicated character. As for Harry, I had a bit too much fun with his superior intelligence (I may have overdone it a bit), but it's more interesting that way, I think. I really don't like reading Harry as too naive and gullible. I like him to have a mind of his own (plus I can go to town with all that scientific info). Yeah, Dumbledore is frustrating, but he really didn't intend to cause Harry harm. Too little, too late, though. Thanks again for your feedback, and I hope you enjoyed your holiday.
Title: No Matter What 23 Dec 2014 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful :D

    Author's Response: Thank you :)
Title: No Matter What 23 Dec 2014 1:20 pm
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: No Matter What 22 Dec 2014 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    wow!!!

    este fue un hermoso capítulo,

    tan emocional,

    y tan maravilloso al mismo tiempo,

    fue wow!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: No Matter What 22 Dec 2014 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *whimpers* You know how to draw out your audience. This is really well done, and I want to know more. Goody, we get to see if Harry will be a lion, snake, badger or eagle next chapter! Kudos and keep it up please!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Well, Harry isn't actually going to be sorted next chapter, he'll just be talking about it. But you will find out what his house is eventually.
Title: No Matter What 22 Dec 2014 11:37 am
Reviewer: Demi (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter, I love this story so much! Well done and have a very merry Christmas :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoyed your holiday.
Title: No Matter What 22 Dec 2014 9:26 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Signed) [Report This]
    Heartbreakingly beautiful story, thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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