This was really interesting. I want some more. The Severus is a bit different than most, but not in a bad way. I hope someday you come back to finish this. (~.^)
| Title: Chapter 7
| 26 Nov 2015 6:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Daiski (Anonymous)
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OH MY GOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAASSEEEE CONTINUE THIS IT'S ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AND I CAN'T HANDLE IT OH MY GOOOODDD. YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT HERE PLEEEASSEEEE UPDATEEEE
Talk about puting it off... but I do like the honorary Slythering bit. I'm curious to see if the Slytherins would even be able to "adopt" Harry into their ranks.. thats a lot of hate for The-Boy-Who-Lived.. Oh, but at least your story is wonderfully written. :)
Hmph, that ending though... ;) lol jk, s'long as you write more I will not be angry. As for how long it took for Harry to break and say something I don't think there was a problem with that. As for Nott, thats an interesting development, you said he wouldn't have much air time, but if you reconsidered I think it would make an interesting twist to the story.
Let them be happy Dumbledore!!!! :)
I was in the middle of typing a review, and hope that it didn't accept my partial review as one -- if so, that's why it is abruptly cut off. Computer glitch.
I am really enjoying this story, and am curious/concerned about Dumbledore's scowl as Snape leaves. I like the laughter between Harry and Theo, and am really looking forward to reading more of this.
I like that Draco is a bit hyper, and can totally envision him being that way (in a safe environment, and in his second year). It's a cool idea that Slytherin 'adopts' those who have been abused. I like the idea of Theodore Nott being there to help Harry through this.
Children who are abused do reach the end of their ropes, and, when someone comes along who is persistent and consistent in their lives, someone they can trust, they do tell. They also make it out like it's no big deal. So, for me, at least, I think this is very believable, and I like the pace at which this story is going.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 08 Oct 2014 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: kisa167 (Anonymous)
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I love this, please update soon I need to know what happens! This is such a heartbreaking story.
So looking forward to the next chapter.
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